이희주 2019.10.30 19:52

(1820이희주)Your writing was very creative and interesting. I thought your writting at the front of the essay were really interesting and were very realistic. Also, I think it is urgent to regulate and make a law on zoos. In addition, we need to treat animals suffering physically and mentally. As you mentioned at the end, the zoo should be a place to protect animals, not a place to see them. Therefore, I think zoos that do not consider animal’s life, right and satisfy and pleasure only humans should be abolished.
김나영 2019.10.30 23:23

(1802 김나영) It was very creative and impressive that you inserted colloquial style at the beginning of your essay. It caught my attention. And I agree that animal diseases can spread to humans. I didn't think about that. Especially, I totally agree that stress in animals weakens the immune system, leading to disease. So, in reverse, animal's disease can return to humans. It is definitely bad for both animals and humans. And your first argument is very similar with my argument! For Wild animals, which have very wide range of activity, zoos are very small space.
서승현 2019.10.31 23:39

(1808서승현)Writing it in the introductory way helped me understand. And it really didn't make sense that there was a zoo that had a fruit bat known as a hostess who mutated MERS, a virus, that caused stress in animals, weakened the immune system, and caused disease. I also agree that the legal standard for administering management should prohibit hands-on experience programs for touching animals directly. In fact, animals are a lot of stress due to the experience of the tail is an instance of the scene did see.