최지현 2019.10.30 12:46

Your writing is really amazing. I also think zoos provide many disadvantages to animals.
However, the third reason in particular raises the question. Because touching and taking pictures of animals is something i think we need to fix. Originally, glass walls were made to protect animals, but I think the awareness of zoos is worsening due to human error.
이지은 2019.11.01 00:27

최지현 : Of course it is our fault to touch animals. However, most children are indiscriminately touching the animals, and these children are still less aware of life and can be touched by animals. In this case, the person in charge of the zoo must first protect the animal.
이희주 2019.10.30 17:57

(1820이희주)I could feel that your opinion was logical and reasonable. I completely agree with your idea. Even if zoos try to protect animals, the original purpose is, monetary profits. As you mentioned in your essay, poor facilities in the zoo cause mental and physical damage to animals. I still remember the scene of the penguin's mental illness on TV. The zoo is also a framework that opposes the nature of the food chain. From this perspective, I think zoos that break the balance of life in animals should be abolished.
이지은 2019.11.01 00:29

이희주 : Thank you for seeing and agreeing with me
김나영 2019.10.31 23:41

(1802 김나영) Your essay was creative, especially your title. I could feel the passion of your argument. And your third assert was left in my mind. These days, there are still many people who abuse animals. I am so sad when I read article about it. These people have to treat animals same with humans. Animals are not things but dignified life.
이지은 2019.11.01 00:31

김나영 : Thanks for listening to my opinion, people's perception of animals is still low. I hope my essay will help improve people's awareness of animals