백혜민 2019.06.26 23:34

[2국13 백혜민] I agree to your opinion. I heard a lot of examples similar to mine and thought similar to me. And it was good to explain how dangerous game addiction is. There was trust in reading article because there was a precise basis, such as explaining the example of an international organization. And it was good to organize the contents of the article easily.
신아연 2019.06.27 16:27

(2난18 최주연)
Your writing was very good. But if there's one thing that's missing, your rationale is already public. It would have been better if you had a little more personal and original evidence. But the part I described about international organizations was very good. I was able to acquire knowledge that I didn't know. Thank you. I'll see you at school.